√When you 're gone- Avril Lavigne

wadashiwa

'When You're Gone'

I always needed time on my own
I never thought I'd need you there when i cry
And the days feel like years when I'm alone
And the bed where you lie
Is made up on your side

When you walk away i count the steps that you take
Do you see how much i need you right now?

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face i came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words i need to hear to always get me through the day
And make it ok
I miss you

I've never felt this way before
And the things that i do
remind me of you
And the clothes you left lye on the floor
And they smell just like you
I love the things that you do

When you walk away i count the steps that you take
Do you see how much i need you right now?

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face i came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words i need to hear to always get me through the day
And make it ok
I miss you

We will be for each other
Now and forever (or "I'll keep forever")
I know we were
Ohhhhh
All I ever wanted was for you to know
Everything i do i give my heart and soul
I find it hard to breathe
I need to feel you hear with me
yeah

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face i came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words i need to hear to always get me through the day
And make it ok
I miss you

[ 本帖最后由 Billie.J 于 2007-6-21 22:16 编辑 ]

Billie.J

LZ的英文发音满清晰的，人声稍微单薄了点，如果唱的再有力度一些会显的更有激情一些~~~继续努力，支持新人ING~~~

say123

很不错啊，唱的真好，我很喜欢这首歌呢，加油啊！

唐棠初

啊呀。。俺近段日子滴最爱嘎嘎~~~看名字不听都要先顶起啦~~~咩~~~~~~~~~[回头编辑哦也~~~]
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俺听这歌到中间会起鸡皮的哦~~~先赞个~~哈哈~~~~
LZ这个副歌部分绝对缺爆发力的~~~~~要喊开喊开喊开……再喊开啊~~
酱就接近从头到尾都让人鸡皮勒嘎嘎~~~~那会非常非常非常好听~~~~哦也~~~
支持~~~！！！！加油~~！！！

支持~~~！！！！加油~~！！！

再支持~~~！！！加油~~！！！

[ 本帖最后由 唐棠初 于 2007-6-22 01:00 编辑 ]

梦别醒

喜欢这首歌～！
楼主还不错啊～满有爆发力的！！
加油～！！

hermione09

超稀饭届过歌呢！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！赞个哈！

再见

都翻唱，好厉害啦！！！！

adell

幻觉？？？

                  怎么觉得有VV的影子在这声音背后晃晃的。。。。。。

楼主的假声感觉有点像……
                                                                  唱得好悲情啊~~~```````

风WIND

我也要翻唱这首歌的男声版～不过最近耳朵闷住了，好 难受～～

cclovess

LZ的发音感觉很舒服呢!!!
呵呵~不错喔~~加油~~~