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回复 Palmwind01
well, was not about to say much about it, the main problem with this piece is tha ...
mike05 发表于 2010-3-19 21:53
Hi, Good evening! Your English should be improved in your vocabulary and garammar.
"the vocal folds " should be corrected into "the vocal cords "(声带);the idiomatic English way of your"struggling on make those notes" should be "struggling to hit those high notes"(拼命唱出那些高音,英语中说唱高音的“唱”用“hit”)。Now in my opinion, this website is more than learning to sing and finding what we are searching for, just here we can polish up our English ! Don't be angry, just kidding ! |
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