酷玩的《Yellow》新手~~

noah520

新手，用cool edit pro~录的歌！只用一个完美混响，没有做太多的后期，希望大大们指点指点！谢谢~~嘻嘻~~

虚心接受大家，批评建议~~谢谢！



Look at the stars,
Look how they shine for you,
And all the thhing you do,
Yeah, they were all Yellow.
I came along,
I wrote a song for you,
And everything you do,
And it was called Yellow.
So then I took my turn,
Oh what a thing to have done,
And it was all Yellow.
Your skin
Oh yeah, your skin and bones,
Turn into something beautiful,
You know, you know I love you so,
You know I love you so.
I swam across,
I jumped across for you,
Oh what a thing to do.
Cos you were all Yellow,
I drew a line,
I drew a line for you,
Oh what a thing to do,
And it was all Yellow.
Your skin,
Oh yeah your skin and bones,
Turn into something beautiful,
And you know,
For you Id bleed myself dry,
For you Id bleed myself dry.
Its true,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine for,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine for you,
Look how they shine.
Look at the stars,
Look how they shine for you,
And all the things that you do.

[ 本帖最后由 noah520 于 2008-9-15 00:32 编辑 ]

wooohu

一开始是不错喔！！！
但是  几句过后 节拍就对不上了 有慢了有抢的！！！
后来听到有点和声的地方！！我猜！！应该是音轨对不上伴奏！！！
因为我看到LZ说是一轨录成的，最容易发生这种事了！！！

noah520

谢谢版主大人精心点评，本人向来对拍子现在都控制的不好，不知道有什么办法可以把拍子捉的准一点呢？

旺德福

我的节奏感也是不太好，朋友建议我多听，不要急着跟着原唱唱，然后边听边打拍子，觉得听熟了，再小声的跟着边打拍子边唱，经过实践证明有效果

chingnung

高音有點ㄍㄧㄥ喔...
節奏確實是慢了...
但聲音本身還是很好聽的..
繼續加油!

xuwenjing163

Ｉ　ＷＲＯＴＥ　Ａ　ＳＯＮＧ　ＦＯＲ　ＹＯＵ　　　　。。。后面还有很多类似的都是后半拍进的啊　　大哥！～　　　好奇怪啊
多听听原版　　你这个版本是完全改版的唱法了／。。。

myyaoxia

不要听着伴奏唱嘛~跟正原唱唱就好了赛。。前面不是快半句就是慢半句。。。

capuccinuo

很又感觉~~~~
LZ加油~~~~~

vitechy

我有种说不出的感觉！

47039553

感觉~~~~
      不错喔！！！