Backstreetboy - Shape of my heart

SBLJ

大家给点意见吧....
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[ti:Shape Of My Heart]
[ar:Backstreet Boys]
[al:Black And Blue]


[00:03.60]Hmm, yeah, yeah
[00:09.30]Baby, please try to forgive me
[00:19.00]Stay here don't put out the glow
[00:28.67]Hold me now don't bother
[00:33.25]If every minute it makes me weaker
[00:36.75]You can save me from the man that I've become
[00:45.29]Oh yeah
[00:46.79]Lookin' back on the things I've done
[00:51.54]I was tryin' to be someone
[00:55.94]I played my part, kept you in the dark
[01:01.24]Now let me show you the shape of my heart
[01:09.77]Send in this beautiful loneliness that's tragical
[01:18.90]So help me I can't win this war
[01:25.61]Oh no
[01:28.98]Touch me now don't bother
[01:33.69]If every second it makes me weaker
[01:37.30]You can save me from the man I've become
[01:47.50]Lookin' back on the things I've done
[01:52.20]I was tryin' to be someone
[01:56.50]I played my part, kept you in the dark
[02:01.83]Now let me show you the shape of my heart
[02:08.50]I'm here with my confession
[02:12.99]Got nothing to hide no more
[02:16.90]I don't know where to start
[02:21.70]But to show you the shape of my heart
[02:32.40]I'm lookin' back on things I've done
[02:37.55]I never wanna play the same old part
[02:42.75]I'll keep you in the dark
[02:46.79]Now let me show you the shape of my heart
[02:51.40]Lookin' back on the things I've done
[02:55.00]I was tryin' to be someone
[02:59.20]I played my part, kept you in the dark
[03:04.90]Now let me show you the shape of my heart
[03:10.95]Lookin' back on the things I've done
[03:14.20]I was tryin' to be someone
[03:18.65]I played my part, kept you in the dark
[03:24.03]Now let me show you the shape of my heart
[03:30.05]show you the shape of my heart

lukejackson

节奏不是很准,象Hmm, yeah, yeah,Oh yeah,Oh no什么的

SBLJ

... 你还挺细心
我觉得毕竟是翻唱,节奏误差只要控制在1/4拍之内,就没必要在死掐了...
好些明星有时还故意抢拍拖拍呢...如果连节奏都一样岂不是练一点自己的特色都没了?
再比如Unchained Melody这首歌,该用什么固定的节奏唱呢??一个音该唱几拍呢??

白矮星

和声的部分有点弱，跟楼上的一样，唱得有点死板了～～

SBLJ

3楼....
我也想让合音明显一点...因为很多人都说我偷懒不唱和声...郁闷
我晕....我的话筒是耳机自带,录出来的声音和原版和声听起来根本就不是一个声音环境....如果刻意张显本音的话会连整首歌的效果都破坏的...原版的和声和独唱音量大小就是这么个比率...
至于唱的死板...这是个人能力问题...  
连这首歌本身的风格和感觉还没有把握好怎么唱出自己的风格....
英语有不能像老外那样游刃有余...唱的时候还得注意单词发音呢...
累... ...

欧美音乐

算了,不给你指出不足之处了,估计你听了之后会不以为然的

babyass

很喜欢后街的歌
不过这位LZ明显有些老孔雀吧？
言重有些 不过希望您能谦虚一些

ninaliu1012

唱的挺不错的,节奏把握上还是弱了点,不过很不错了,BSB是我的大爱,楼主加油~~~

kevinscottdj

跟我的那首用的是一样的伴奏啊，带原版和声的。似乎听起来声音不太明显。
哎，现在一听到BSB的就怀念某K啊。。。。。

i_goodluke

LZ声音本质不错啊。就是唱工有些欠缺。
咬字不够那个那个```````气息欠缺。高音就难上咯````加油啊！顶！