I could never say goodbye - 来源于"夕阳醉了"

firec

这是多年前在高中二年级时所尝试的填词,当时就觉得旋律非常适合来改编.兴致所致就...
词有点青涩,但还算压韵,容易上口. 望多评价!

No one knows you, no one cries you,
And I love you forever.
Nothing can do, nothing could make me smile.
You are lover, in my best heart
But you never think it's truth words.
You can call me, I just wait for so long...
When the sun is from rising to go down,
I still wait for day by day,
But lonely nights come to me, again...
Tell me why you leave me with no reason,
Tell me what I've done wrong to you.
Holding you I never feel sorrow,
How can I'd broken heart, tonight
Everyday I miss you for lonely,
Everyday I love you so.
Leaving you I will be so hollow,
I could never say goodbye

zorro66

楼主你很有才啊。。自己填的词。。佩服佩服。。表示严重敬仰

~~夜惊魂~~

哇!很好！谢谢楼主！带来好伴奏！

kellyclarkson

楼主写的好感人啊 ，好棒

hujunyu8866

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azurelucid

歌词的确是有点青涩哈～～
唱得还挺有感觉的，副歌的部分还能听到中文的女声合音，哈哈  XD
支持了，挺喜欢lz声音的～～

xlj177

haha，I fooling U~~

娴情

词填得不错，有点意境且和旋律配合的也和谐，楼主e 文不错吧，这个也算半创作了，支持一个！唱的方面和原唱比另有一番味道