Jay-z-Dirt off your shoulder me singing

hotfs

You're now tuned into the muh'***in greatest
Turn the music up in the headphones
Tim, you can go and brush your shoulder off nigga
I got you, yeah
[Chorus: Jay-Z]
If you feelin like a pimp nigga, go and brush your shoulders off
Ladies is pimps too, go and brush your shoulders off
Niggaz is crazy baby, don't forget that boy told you
Get, that, dirt off your shoulder
[Verse One]
I probably owe it to y'all, proud to be locked by the force
Tryin to hustle some things, that go with the Porsche
Feelin no remorse, feelin like my hand was forced
Middle finger to the law, nigga grip'n my balls
All the ladies they love me, from the bleachers they screamin
All the ballers is bouncin they like the way I be leanin
All the rappers be hatin, off the track that I'm makin
But all the hustlers they love it just to see one of us make it
Came from the bottom the bottom, to the top of the pots
Nigga London, Japan and I'm straight off the block
Like a running back, get it man, I'm straight off the block
I can run it back nigga cause I'm straight with the Roc
[Chorus]
If you feelin like a pimp nigga, go and brush your shoulders off
Ladies is pimps too, go and brush your shoulders off
Niggaz is crazy baby, don't forget that boy told you
Get, that, dirt off your shoulder
[Chorus Two]
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
[Verse Two]
Your homey Hov' in position, in the kitchen with soda
I just whipped up a watch, tryin to get me a Rover
Tryin to stretch out the coca, like a wrestler, yessir
Keep the Heckler close, you know them smokers'll test ya
But like, fifty-two cards when I'm, I'm through dealin
Now fifty-two bars come out, now you feel 'em
Now, fifty-two cars roll out, remove ceiling
In case fifty-two broads come out, now you chillin
with a boss bitch of course S.C. on the sleeve
At the 40/40 club, ESPN on the screen
I paid a grip for the jeans, plus the slippers is clean
No chrome on the wheels, I'm a grown-up for real
[Chorus + Chorus Two]
If you feelin like a pimp nigga, go and brush your shoulders off
Ladies is pimps too, go and brush your shoulders off
Niggaz is crazy baby, don't forget that boy told you
Get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
[Verse Three]
Your boy back in the building, Brooklyn we back on the map
Me and my beautiful beeeeeeeitch in the back of that 'Bach
I'm the realest that run it, I just happen to rap
I ain't gotta clap at 'em, niggaz scared of that black
I drop that +Black, Album+ then I back, out it
As the best rapper alive nigga ask about me
From Bricks to Billboards, from grams to Grammys
The O's to opposite, Orphan Annie
You gotta pardon Jay, for sellin out the Garden in a day
I'm like a young Marvin in his hey'
I'm a hustler homey, you a customer crony
Got some, dirt on my shoulder, could you brush it off for me?
[Chorus + Chorus Two]
If you feelin like a pimp nigga, go and brush your shoulders off
Ladies is pimps too, go and brush your shoulders off
Niggaz is crazy baby, don't forget that boy told you
Get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You gotta get, that, dirt off your shoulder
You're now tuned into the muh'***in greatest
Best rapper alive, best rapper alive

hotfs

四喜和楼上朋友说的我会努力改善的，谢谢

多讲实话，对人进步是有很多帮助的，谢谢你们

四喜

恕我直言，好话别人都说了，我就只说不好的。

喷Mic 太严重了。

你的Rap 的听起来，没有重点，有些地方稍微重点的地方感觉也错了。
（这个重点不仅仅是你咬字的重音，还有情绪的重点）

后期制作效果的问题 ...
heysaxon 发表于 2009-8-28 21:51

||||哈哈，LS的同学提的建议很中肯
hotfs同学之前的麦不好，所以常出现喷麦现象
后期他基本不会，可以说歌都是live版
相信这些问题以后都会慢慢得到改善。恩！！！

heysaxon

恕我直言，好话别人都说了，我就只说不好的。

喷Mic 太严重了。

你的Rap 的听起来，没有重点，有些地方稍微重点的地方感觉也错了。
（这个重点不仅仅是你咬字的重音，还有情绪的重点）

后期制作效果的问题。可能不熟悉软件等等原因，不过最起码，都要将vocal 的声音音量跟配乐的音量的 比例搞好。

哈~~ 你的声音很好，很有潜质，希望你会以后每天都进步~~~ 加油！

四喜

恩，我还是最喜欢这首
节奏拿捏得非常好，发音也很道地。。。
hotfs的歌都学得很用心
现在换麦后，不喷麦了相信会更加好！
期待下一首remix版的rap早点出来
啊哈哈哈

hotfs

谢谢FoShizzo兄的支持,呵呵, rap everyday!

FoShizzo

没有白等待哦。 很有Jay-Z 的感觉。 the only problem,前面好像慢了一小半拍。总之，非常牛

myuki

唱得太太。。。。。。。。。。55555555
还是不说了。。。
赞一个算了～～～～～～～～～～

四喜

太棒了！这感觉！！！
You gotta get, that...
哈哈，喜欢这句的调调。

PS：哥们，真是非常希望你能翻excuse me miss

半夜再来听。
感觉实在好，太jay-z了。直接收走。

myuki

哈哈哈～～～～～～～～～～～～～～～
你们坐阳台了～～～～～～～～