you raise me up 初来仙来

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英文不太标准··：）

when i am down and, oh my soul, so weary;
when troubles come and my heart burdened be;
then, i am still and wait here in the silence,
until you come and sit awhile with me.
you raise me up, so i can stand on mountains;
you raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
i am strong, when i am on your shoulders;
you raise me up... to more than i can be.

you raise me up, so i can stand on mountains;
you raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
i am strong, when i am on your shoulders;
you raise me up... to more than i can be.
you raise me up, so i can stand on mountains;
you raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
i am strong, when i am on your shoulders;
you raise me up... to more than i can be.
you raise me up, so i can stand on mountains;
you raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
i am strong, when i am on your shoulders;
you raise me up... to more than i can be.
you raise me up... to more than i can be.

wooohu

哇 才听到 唱的真不错。。不过ms  raise的发音有点怪怪 其他也没啥了

UP UP UP

东西

声音不错哈，发音再研究一下就能出专辑了呵呵

linlin

哇塞  超强！！  喜欢的歌曲 喜欢的声音

唱得还行   加油    VC  ........

glynken

唱得不错~声音也很好听~
不过那个英文真可以再学学~

nostars

唱得不错~声音也很好听~
不过那个英文真可以再学学~有些词因为发音不准变得怪怪的~因此感情就表达不完整~~~
“raise”的a发的【ei】，“walk”的“l”不发音，更不要发成“work”，带上卷舌音就更不好了，up的爆破音p要发出来一点。
听了一遍，发音的问题就只听出来这么多。同志仍需努力，唱的部分都挺好的！加油！！！

minos_design

谢谢朋友们的支持哈··
希望朋友们能够听歌留言哈··
多多提出宝贵意见··
你们的耳朵是我学习提高最好的老师··
谢谢哈·

stara

感觉不错呀~~
声线不错呀~~~
发音可以慢慢改进滴~~
XD支持

萧语

很好听的歌哈，楼主唱得也很好听，喜欢高潮部分有点沙哑的声音！