大叔撕裂乱吼版LISTEN-Beyonce(碧昂斯)

dolaahnsin

大叔撕裂乱吼版
1. 走调  2. 不会R&B 直唱过去  3. 依旧寒冷  4. 怒吼撕裂  5. 鸟语不通
请大家板砖伺候吧 之所以发上来是为了锻炼大家的意志 ^^
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Beyonce Knowles-LISTEN (碧昂斯诺斯-倾听)

Listen to the song here in my heart
A melody I start but can't complete

Listen(hmm...)to the sound from deep within
It's only beginning to find release
Oh the time has come for my dreams to be heard
They will not be pushed aside and turned into your own
All 'cause you won't listen

Listen
I am alone at a crossroads
I'm not at home in my own home
And I've tried and tried to say what's on my mind
You should have known

Oh now I'm done believing you
You don't know what I'm feeling
I'm more than what you made of me
I followed the voice you gave to me
But now I've got to find my own

You should have listened there is someone here inside
Someone I thought had died so long ago
Oh I'm screaming out and my dreams will be heard
They will not be pushed aside or worse into your own
All 'cause you won't listen

Listen
I am alone at a crossroads
I'm not at home in my own home
And I've tried and tried to say what's on my mind
You should have known

Oh now I'm done believing you
You don't know what I'm feeling
I'm more than what you made of me
I followed the voice you gave to me
But now I've got to find my own

I don't know where I belong
But I'll be moving on
If you don't
If you won't

Listen to the song here in my heart
A melody I start but I will complete

Oh now I'm done believing you
You don't know what I'm feeling
I'm more than what you made of me
I followed the voice you think you gave to me
But now I've got to find my own

My own

songyi_buaa

咬字轻一点应该好很多：）

azurelucid

verse的部分还不错，key有点低了就是。。。
后面到了副歌听得出lz很想唱出力度，但感觉有点是用嗓子用力了，如果能用上气息可能效果会好一些～～
加油  ：）

dolaahnsin

谢谢以上两位的专业指点 铁定要重新唱的 我的音域不行 如何将音提高一些呢？ 因为现在的KEY已经是很舒服的区域了！~尤其听见了Mu-Q大哥的杰作 真的让我叹服不已啊！！~这就是所说的学人家的始终学不来吧！！~爆发力也用错了地方吧？！！呵呵 还是先学习一下再出来献丑吧！~^^

无论如何 谢谢两位的鼓励 我会继续学习的 然后再诠释这首歌曲

zorro66

我觉得 还挺不错的。。楼主 您太谦虚了。。高潮部分 还是挺有感觉的。。挺棒～！！！喜欢你 ha。ha。。吼叫的 几句 很有范儿～！

Domian

entertainers tend to make people feel good
and for whatever reason, you make me feel good in a correct way!
loved it! cheers mate!!

dolaahnsin

再次感谢以上两位的点评
其实这个版本我现在听上去的缺点还有很多
比如转音、高音、破音和爆发力等等问题
我现在在学习发声技巧呢
等慢慢体会了再来唱这首有难度的歌曲吧
现在唱的还真得很不成熟
谢谢啦
^^

唱烁预言

打完酱油赶快跑！！！！！

顶啊~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

zorro66

再次路过 所以 再次支持下。。个人非常喜欢listen这首歌曲。。。同时支持楼主