THE FEAR--PLUTOSTORY，欢迎批评指点！

plutostory

我真的想要很多很多意见，请多多指点！

Willz

1. 很多元音发音都有问题
2. 歌词有擅自更改
3. 音色还不错
哈哈

plutostory

回复 2# Willz

擅自模仿原唱的英式口语的恶果呀。。。。。
歌词真没改过的说，
谢谢！

axlsizzy

楼主的口语有待加强啊，

不过声音还是蛮好听的

plutostory

当看到你们说我口语有问题时真是很伤心的说，于是我再重听了原唱很多次，为了找出我的不足，但我还是很不解，请指点

plutostory

Lily Allen - The Fear / 丽莉·爱兰 - 恐惧之神

I wanna be rich and I want lots of money / 我要腰缠万贯，我要财富斗车
I don't care about clever I don't care about funny / 我不要聪明绝顶，我不要风趣幽默
I want lots of clothes and I want lots of diamonds / 我要披红挂绿，我要珠光宝气
I heard people die while they are trying to find them / 我听说人为财死，鸟为食亡

I'll take my clothes off and it will be shameless / 赤身裸体，我不会感觉羞耻
Cuz everyone knows that's how you get famous / 一脱成名，这道理众所周知
I'll look at the sun and I'll look in the mirror / 我会去看太阳，我会去照镜子
I'm on the right track yeah I'm on to a winner / 前路没有坎坷，我已胜券在握

I don't know what's right and what's real anymore / 我不再明白该如何区分真假对错
I don't know how I'm meant to feel anymore / 我不再懂得该如何规矩地感悟生活
When we think it will all become clear / 细细想想，这道理显而易见
Cuz I'm being taken over by The Fear / 是恐惧之神，令我的世界慢慢沦陷

Life's about film stars and less about mothers / 生活眷顾明星，并非为百姓而设
It's all about fast cars and passing each other / 生活讲的全是来回穿梭的豪华跑车
But it doesn't matter cause I'm packing plastic / 但这一切与我何干，我得专心呵护我的容颜
and that's what makes my life so fucking fantastic / 厚厚的面膜使生活变得实在是妙不可言
And I am a weapon of massive consumption / 我是台消费机器，永不知停歇
and its not my fault it's how I'm program to function / 我就是为此而生，这实非我错
I'll look at the sun and I'll look in the mirror / 我会去看太阳，我会去照镜子
I'm on the right track yeah I'm on to a winner / 前路没有坎坷，我已胜券在握

I don't know what's right and what’s real anymore / 我不再明白该如何区分真假对错
I don't know how I'm meant to feel anymore / 我不再懂得该如何规矩地感悟生活
When we think it will all become clear/ 细细想想，这道理显而易见
Cuz I'm being taken over by The Fear / 是恐惧之神，令我的世界慢慢沦陷

Forget about guns and forget ammunition / 枪炮与弹药，你要统统忘掉
Cause I'm killing them all on my own little mission / 我只要动根手指，就能把他们全部报销
Now I'm not a saint but I'm not a sinner / 我不是圣人，可也不是罪人
Now everything is cool as long as I'm getting thinner / 只要我身材越发苗条，这世界便是万般美好

I don't know what's right and what's real anymore /  我不再明白该如何区分真假对错
I don't know how I'm meant to feel anymore /  我不再懂得该如何规矩地感悟生活
When we think it will all become clear/ 细细想想，这道理显而易见
Cause I'm being taken over by Fear/ 是恐惧之神，令我的世界慢慢沦陷


为了证明我没改歌词，还是附上歌词，
感觉原唱的口音就是这样的。。。

kylequan

我倒觉得LZ注意力全放在发音上了，所以投入感情方面欠佳，还有也许这首对于你音低了点，所以影响发挥了，继续努力！

plutostory

我倒觉得LZ注意力全放在发音上了，所以投入感情方面欠佳，还有也许这首对于你音低了点，所以影响发挥了，继 ...
kylequan 发表于 2010-4-30 02:56

    这个真是老问题了，总感觉感情不够丰富。好的，我会加油的！