原创钢琴伴奏无节奏RAP-my queen

VaciAnn

my queen 's leaving now
you can see she's crying（这是假想的）
my queen 's leaving now
she's beautiful and grace
my queen has nothing to take but the ear nail（这写的有些恶，，呵呵）
which i gave her for the first time and last time
daisies are smileing happily（我唯一送皇后的耳钉还是雏菊状的）
it's not the time i saw her for the leaving
we met we slept we we sang we ate(这个````我写的夸张了些，we指我们整个寝室还是我和皇后，自己遐想去)
when i heard she's leaving
nothing tear me down, but the ache and great pain
what's going on without me,queen?
you must miss me
see the stars in the sky like your eyes' shining
cause there're tears in it
i cannot bare it ,you're in great sadness
what if you can't stand these?
my queen,my dear dear queen
your shoes on my feet so fitted(皇后的脚39，我38，她留下的2双鞋系紧点就非常合脚)
they're not converse but my favorite
or the reason why you don't wanna go on?
i'll think none of these,so i can keep on
so please scome back,queen,we need you

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my queen 's leaving now
she didn't dare to see
all the things' choking
she did not dare to see
we're all end in ,tragedy
she told us she'll come back(此依旧为假想段)
though we've already known it won't````
be true!(其实这是接上句的)everyday we think of her
her sweet smile and her cherry pretty mouse
but you left us so sudenlly
we cannot believe
it must be the farthest place you've gone through(这个有点夸张)
we don't even know whether you'll forget us
if there has been an accident

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but we know,we don't
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这RAP花了3天写````其实第一天是从邱小翟的晚自习开始写的，被发现3次被制止2次```第2天没写，第3天老陆出去开会的时候写完，哎，老母在家叫我怎么录阿，专门坏我好事````然后就是感觉这RAP````质量很差````皇后你将就下吧````我第一次完成的完整RAP````

seeviacai

这首RAP应该很好听！！！

VaciAnn

回复 2# seeviacai


    我表示沉痛，我的歌暂且就只有这一首勉强能入耳

seeviacai

回复 3# VaciAnn


    很有感觉！你是跟着音乐的感觉rap还是音乐的节奏？

VaciAnn

回复 4# seeviacai


    额····节奏吧，然后感情····我家皇后转学了我很沉痛的

seeviacai

动听的旋律谁都喜欢