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标题: 【大家快来踩呀！】多提意见~Standing Still~，！！！！！！快来吼吼啊！！！！！！！！！！ [打印本页]

作者: jeffandrewlee 时间: 2010-7-14 23:16:02 标题: 【大家快来踩呀！】多提意见~Standing Still~，！！！！！！快来吼吼啊！！！！！！！！！！

本帖最后由 jeffandrewlee 于 2010-7-15 16:09 编辑

还是我好友的歌，老歌了，电脑前录滴，不会做效果呀，就随便用cool edit搞了一下，希望大家将就着听啊，觉得好的也顶下吗，不好也留点意见吗

cuttin' through the darkest night in my two headlights
trying to keep it clear, but i'm losing it here to the twilight
there's a dead end to my left, there's a burning bush to my right
you aren't in sight, you aren't in sight

do you want me, like i want you?
or am i standing still, beneath the darkened sky?
or am i standing still, with the scenery flying by?
or am i standing still, out of the corner of my eye?
was that you passing me by?

mothers on the stoop, boys in souped-up coupes on this hot summer night
between fight and flight is the blind man's sight and the choice that's right
i roll the window down, feel like i'm gonna drown in this strange town
feel broken down, i feel broken down

do you need me, like i need you?
or am i standing still, beneath the darkened sky?
or am i standing still, with the scenery flying by?
or am i standing still, out of the corner of my eye?
was that you passing me by?

sweet sorrow is the call tomorrow
sweet sorrow is the call tomorrow

do you love me, like i love you?
or am i standing still, beneath the darkened sky?
or am i standing still, with the scenery flying by?
or am i standing still, out of the corner of my eye?
was that you passing me by?

are you passing me by?(passing me by)
do you want me?(passing me by)
do you need me, like i need you too?
and do you want me, like i want you?
are you passing me by?

作者: zzlovezq77 时间: 2010-7-14 23:26:48

嘿嘿，我刚也在发但好不容易发上去又听不起不对头。郁闷了~~幸好有哥！！！

作者: jeffandrewlee 时间: 2010-7-15 12:34:57

回复 2# zzlovezq77

谢谢支持

作者: royozhong 时间: 2010-7-15 16:50:49

LZ的声音听起来很舒服，没有那种吵吵的感觉，不过有些地方换气要注意。加油。

作者: Erica 时间: 2010-7-15 17:25:55

我来支持你啦。。我没听过原唱。听着很舒服呢。。
有些地方有点不稳。。没关系啦。喜欢！

作者: 爱依范 时间: 2010-7-15 17:45:11

唱的不错，顶顶

作者: xuyi 时间: 2010-7-15 22:18:39

唱得不错的所，支持一次啊，呵呵呵

作者: jeffandrewlee 时间: 2010-7-15 23:05:20

回复 5# Erica

谢谢呀，是有点不稳，呵呵，估计离话筒太近了，这不是我的歌，我的好友的，我现在在准备考研究生，都没时间录歌，谢谢你支持，以后常走动！

作者: Erica 时间: 2010-7-16 16:57:27

回复 8# jeffandrewlee

嗯嗯

作者: jeffandrewlee 时间: 2010-7-16 19:52:37

回复 6# 爱依范

谢谢支持，呵呵呵

作者: jeffandrewlee 时间: 2010-7-16 19:53:50

回复 4# royozhong

谢谢你的意见，我会告诉她叫她注意的，thanks

作者: liro 时间: 2010-7-24 21:19:32

这女声好干净~```````````

作者: Domian 时间: 2010-7-24 22:47:14

来支持一下原创的么？感觉挺好
稍微有一点点个人感觉：歌词倒是很有时下流行的”吸血鬼“意境～旋律也挺平缓不过mm的人声还是感觉少了点rock的力道，能多一点力度会不会更好点？
纯个人感觉说错了吾怪哈～～
人工置顶一下

作者: jeffandrewlee 时间: 2010-7-27 09:35:45

回复 13# Domian

谢谢支持哈。不是原创，呵呵呵，也谢谢你的意见哟~~·

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