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标题: 【重新录制】Fly Me To The Moon 应该有提高吧...... [打印本页]

作者: 樱和日丽    时间: 2009-7-9 15:43:18     标题: 【重新录制】Fly Me To The Moon 应该有提高吧......

之前发过一个,效果一点儿也不好,又重新录了一下,后期也学了一些,自我感觉还不错。某桜知道自己在唱歌这方面还有许多缺点,希望大家能多多批评并且多提宝贵意见
~~先谢谢大家了~~~

Fly Me To The Moon

Poets often use many words
To say a simple thing
It takes thought and time and rhyme
To make a poem sing

With music and words I've been playing
For you I have written a song
To be sure that you' ll know what I am saying
I'll translate as i go along

Fly me to the moon
And let me play among the stars
Won't you let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars
In other words:Hold my hands!
In other words:Darrlng kiss me!

Fill my heat with song
And let me sing forever more
Cuz you are all I long for all I woreship and adore
In other words:Please be true!
In other words:I love you!

In other words:Please be true!
In other words:I love you!
作者: Tu2    时间: 2009-7-9 16:30:22

话说我还没听过这个版本的,唱的还不错哈
只是OTHER,很容易听成OTER,转音还需要再控制好一点。
哈哈,一起加油!!
作者: azurelucid    时间: 2009-7-9 16:31:00

我觉得lz的声色不错的,这次录得比上次也有进步哦~~效果好了很多。。。
从"Fly me to the moon”开始感觉要好一些,但音准感觉还是不太稳定。。。
不过这首歌的确不太好掌握,lz可以再多练习下~~
作者: 樱和日丽    时间: 2009-7-9 16:47:56

谢谢两位的意见以及楼上的版主~~每次我发新歌都有你的认真回帖和建议鼓励~某桜要谢谢你哦~有你的支持偶会加油的~
作者: 天花板上吊着猫    时间: 2009-7-10 03:57:42

不错哦,有进步~

小建议,颤音和转音,刚好这两项都是Hikki的长项- -~
不过这些都是靠多练习就可以提高的,加油~

音色还是不错的,有些尾音很是亮点,哈哈~~




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